Images don't work for you?

Read my attempt at verbalizing the story.

Monkeylynn and Mooshy sit at the breakfast table with their coffee. Monkeylynn says, 'I don't think Smooshy should draw the comic. He isn't very good at drawing us at different angles. He doesn't know how to use the program. He doesn't understand layout or layers or how to use the talk bubbles.' Mooshy (speaking from a talk bubble that is mostly hidden by object above it and coming from his eye) says, 'I can see that.' Monkeylynn says, 'Can you try to reason with him?' Mooshy says, 'I have to go to work.' Monkeylynn says, 'Mooshy.' Mooshy says, 'Okay, I will talk to him after work. Now we're looking at a traffic jam on the 'Squirrel Highway.' Row and rows of the electric and telephone wires have lines of squirrels chirping and yelling, 'Come on! Move it! Mooshy finally arrives for work at the base of tree with a big sign that says, 'Cheesman Acorn Inc.' There is a smaller sign below that says, 'Employee entrance'. Mooshy is carrying an acorn with him (his lunch). Mooshy (donning a hard hat) yells, 'Booshy! We've got acorns that need burying on the North side! Fooshy! Take a lunch! Booshy yells back, 'Boss, I found an acorn over here!' Someone outside of the panel yells, 'I just buried that!'

At lunchtime, the squirrels sit together at a picnic table listening to a small radio. The voice from the radio says, 'This is Maggie Magpie and you're listening to the Good Bird on WQRM FM. Hope everyone is having a delicious lunch right now! How about that traffic this morning?! It was nuts!' In the afternoon, the squirrels are back to work. Booshy yells, 'I buried an acorn over here, Boss!' Fooshy yells, 'I found an acorn over here, Boss!' Now, traffic is reversed in the afternoon light and Mooshy follows the line of squirrels home along the telephone wires. When he gets home, he goes over to Smooshy's office, which is a brown paper bag, with the words, 'SMOOSHY'S OFFICE. DO NOT DISTURB' written on it. Mooshy says, 'Um... Hey Smooshy?' Inside the bag/office now, Mooshy says, 'Hey cuz, I need to talk to you.' Smooshy says, 'Moosh. I will get the pickles out of the bathtub by Wednesday.'

Mooshy (a timid look on his face) says, 'Monkeylynn wanted me to talk to you about the comic art.' Smooshy says, 'Does she want it to POP more?' Mooshy says, 'No.' Smooshy says, 'She wants me to draw her taller? I can do that.' Mooshy says, 'No.' Smooshy says, 'She thinks it's bad, right? I'm not very good at this.' Mooshy says, 'We both think that you're doing a great job. Your deliberate practice id paying off and each panel is better than the last.' Smooshy blushes. I mean that's a nice thing to say.